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[personal profile] breezeshadow2012-10-07 11:52 am
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Looking for Concrit

Title: Night of the Moon
Genre: Original Fantasy
Pairings: F/F, M/F
Rating: PG-13 due to some minor violence and possibly unsettling topics. Also booze, basically.
Word Count: ~5.2K words
Prompt: [community profile] cottoncandy_bingo Caressing/Petting/Stroking, Party, Bruise, Person & loved one(s) injured/sick simultaneously, Cuddlepile

Story is long, so I'll link to where it is on my journal.

I would love to know a) how the imagery is, b) what was confusing/unclear and c) how the writing style is. Or anything you can think of.

Thank you!
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[personal profile] snowynight2012-07-07 05:35 pm
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Looking for a beta/concrit

Title: Searching the Heaven
fandom or original fic genre: Harukanaru Toki no Naka de | Within the Expanse of a Distant Time, Romance
Characters/Pairings: Minamoto no Yorihisa/Motomiya Akane
Rating/warnings: - PG, no warning so far
Word Count: - 6.7K for now. Estimated to be 10K when it's finished

This piece is a bit long to post to the community, but you can see the current chapters here: Searching the Heaven. I'd love to have some betas, both for basic error-catching and to give me their general reactions. Fandom knowledge is not necessary.

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