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Title: Won't Hold Back Tonight
Fandom or original fic genre: "Junjou Romantica", Romance/romantic
Characters/Pairings: Miyagi Yoh/Takatsuki Shinobu
Rating: NSFW
Word Count: 588

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I wish to improve my skills as a writer. The problem is that I don't have the distance and objectivity I need to see what my flaws are and how to correct them. I'd love to receive concrit and guidance. Thank you.

snowynight

Title: Searching the Heaven
fandom or original fic genre: Harukanaru Toki no Naka de | Within the Expanse of a Distant Time, Romance
Characters/Pairings: Minamoto no Yorihisa/Motomiya Akane
Rating/warnings: - PG, no warning so far
Word Count: - 6.7K for now. Estimated to be 10K when it's finished

This piece is a bit long to post to the community, but you can see the current chapters here: Searching the Heaven. I'd love to have some betas, both for basic error-catching and to give me their general reactions. Fandom knowledge is not necessary.

worksofstone

Title: Recall
fandom or original fic genre: Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/Pairings: Hermione Granger/Scorpius Malfoy
Rating: Explicit / NC-17 for sexual content. Younger character is in his early twenties.
Word Count: 1,569 words

I'm not looking to make major changes (POV, structure, plot), but I'm definitely open to sentence re-writes, paragraph restructuring, cleaning up clarity of language, grammar changes, and the like. I'd like to tweak this story and make it better. :)

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weber_dubois22

Title: Subroutine
fandom or original fic genre: Fanfiction
Characters/Pairings: Jet Bradley, Alan Bradley, Sam Flynn, Kevin Flynn
Rating: PG-13 - standardized violence and adult language
Word Count: - (So far): 36,877

( Preview: Chapter Seven )

snowynight

Title: Wonderland
fandom or original fic genre: Marvel comics, Horror
Characters/Pairings: Luke Cage, Danny Rand, Stephen Strange
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 1369 words

First time posting here! This story 's my first attempt to write a horror story and I would especially like help in structure and the atmosphere.

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healingmirth

I've been meaning to post something here forever, and I kept thinking "next time..." and then not.

With seasonal fic exchanges coming up, though, I sort of wanted to revisit a short-ish piece that I wrote for a prompt. I am not good at dropping into a scene and writing 1000-ish words of dialogue and action and emotion without a ton of exposition, so I usually end up with a glorified not!fic outline, or 10,000 words.

So, help me out, here! General concrit or reaction is great, and I'd also appreciate some suggestions of scenes I could have written to show the stuff that I ended up telling so I can get my brain pointed in the right direction.

Title: Seconds
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing/Characters: Lorne/Zelenka, pre-slash
Rating: PG
Notes: ~1000 words. written for a Porn Battle prompt, but then it didn't even approach porn

( Their time is not their own )

kate

Title: John the True
Author:

kisahawklin/

kate
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: John/Rodney friendship
Rating: 10+
Word count: 4104
Author's Notes: based on the fairytale Faithful John. Originally I had this idea for the Fairytale challenge at

sga_flashfic but it didn't quite get done. Then

lavvyan needed a pick-me-up so I dusted it off, basically rewrote the whole thing, and here it is. Problem is - it's still not working quite right. I wrote this in a hurry, and late (until 3am last night), so it might just be that I was exhausted and rushing. I'm wondering if all I really need is to expand things, that it's too rushed. But I don't think so - I feel like I have no ending, like I am missing some way to bring home the message of trust that isn't just patting the characters on the head and saying 'do better next time'. Help!

crossposted to

concrit_my_fic, sorry for any duplication on your flists!

( John the True )

facetofcathy

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xancredible

Title: Home To Stay
fandom or original fic: Fandom: Leverage
Characters/Pairings: Alec/Eliot Pre-Slash
Rating: G
Word Count: 985

Notes: It's a sequel to To Where You Are but can stand on his own. Not that I would mind if you wanted to check out the prequel ;o)
Title taken from a Josh Groban song.
Disclaimer: If I actually owned Leverage or the characters, I really wouldn't have to write fic about them!
Summary: And then, suddenly, Hardison was there.

( Home To Stay )

Alright guys, what do you think?

healingmirth

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healingmirth

Title: Five Times Rodney was Silent
fandom or original fic: Stargate: Atlantis
Characters/Pairings: Rodney McKay, team, gen
Rating: G
Word Count: 750
Author's note: Something I wrote for

sg1_five_things a few months back. Spoilers for the final season of Atlantis

( Five Times Rodney was Silent )

S	M	T	W	T	F	S
	1	2	3	4	5	6
7	8	9	10	11	12	13
14	15	16	17	18	19	20
21	22	23	24	25	26	27
28	29	30	31

Write_Good: a safe haven for concrit

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Looking for ConCrit - Harry Potter: Hermione Granger/Scorpius Malfoy, Explicit/NC-17

Looking for ConCrit: Subroutine - [TRON 2.0/TRON: LEGACY] - 7/25 - PG-13

Looking for con crit please.

old fic - SGA, Lorne/Zelenka

Please help me. I cannot get this right.

Putting my money where my mouth is...

Fic: Home To Stay [Eliot/Alec] [G] [985]

Fic: Something to Believe in; Live Free or Die Hard; NC-17

Fic: Playtime

Fic: Five Times Rodney McKay was Silent

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