Looking for Concrit
Oct. 7th, 2012 11:52 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
breezeshadowTitle: Night of the Moon
Genre: Original Fantasy
Pairings: F/F, M/F
Rating: PG-13 due to some minor violence and possibly unsettling topics. Also booze, basically.
Word Count: ~5.2K words
Prompt:![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png)
cottoncandy_bingo Caressing/Petting/Stroking, Party, Bruise, Person & loved one(s) injured/sick simultaneously, Cuddlepile
Story is long, so I'll link to where it is on my journal.
I would love to know a) how the imagery is, b) what was confusing/unclear and c) how the writing style is. Or anything you can think of.
Thank you!
Genre: Original Fantasy
Pairings: F/F, M/F
Rating: PG-13 due to some minor violence and possibly unsettling topics. Also booze, basically.
Word Count: ~5.2K words
Prompt:
cottoncandy_bingo Caressing/Petting/Stroking, Party, Bruise, Person & loved one(s) injured/sick simultaneously, CuddlepileStory is long, so I'll link to where it is on my journal.
I would love to know a) how the imagery is, b) what was confusing/unclear and c) how the writing style is. Or anything you can think of.
Thank you!
